aliasditz
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where fears and lies melt away.
So I found an old plot for a fantasy site that me and friend were planning to work on together. It seems interesting enough to me but I wanted to know what other people thought of it. From what I can remember we were planning to have multiple races, and various kingdoms/factions.
From the heavens, was created a single stone. A stone forged by god himself, made to grant a single wish. The only requirement is that the wish must be spoken aloud. With such a simple condition, men and women alike rose to the challenge, to find the stone and have their deepest aspirations granted with a simple sentence. Yet for all of their desperation, their yearning was selfish. Greed ran rampant, and all wanted money, power, omnipotence, and replacements for those that had been lost. With so many selfish desires resurfaced, problems were created for this world. Thievory and trickery quickly turned to violence and betrayal. In time? As the blood was shed, it quickly turned into war. The simple tale of two ambitious kings, both thirsting for the power of god - turned into a nightmare for all involved. With the Kings gone, war polluted the world. Chaos ran rampant throughout the entire world. Food was scarce, water ran dry, even the rain stopped falling: perhaps the earth's own testiment to the carnage, a plea for the bloodshed to stop. If it was truly a message, it fell upon deaf ears. The five year war seemed endless even to the few that remained peaceful, and death became deeply rooted into the warring world. Things only changed when one man rose above all odds and found the stone that the Kings were looking for. Holding the gem within his hands, he looked about the world that surrounded him. It lay in ruins, tattered beyond recognition - and he realized that it needed more help than he could ever imagine needing for himself. It was then that it dawned on him, the reason that the stone was created. The Delta Stone was a test from god, to show the true nature of human beings. The soldier should have taken the stone to his King, to hopefully end the war... but that would not fix things, the world would still be in shambles. So instead? He made a wish. "I wish that the world would return to the way it was. A world with food and forests, water and rain. I want the world to be something to be proud of once more - and for this gemstone to fade into a tale of faslehood." His wish of course, was granted. The area was coated into light: blue and bright and powerful. Water flowed from empty riverbeds, charred forests towered once more throughout the land. Life returned to the way it was meant to be. As for the Delta stone? It was no longer sought after, it was something of myth - folklore, a childish story to tell your children at night. The soldier disappeared along with the stone, granted immortality as a gift from god for being more pure hearted than any other seeking the stone. He guards the gem with his very life, from the greed and selfishness that had the power to infect the entire world.
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